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Post by Rosestar on Nov 16, 2010 17:49:20 GMT -5
Onestar, onestar!!", Onestar was screaming. " Shut up, Onestar, the stories is starting and by the way, yer singing got a "D" by Mr. Hall. Anyways, Once upon a time, in a land about 1000 miles from here using a Magellan GPS, a cat named Tigerstar was on the Thinking chair, rattling his brain. " yonder Glen", began Tigerstar. Oh, sorry, Tigerstar, wrong script"!, yelled Brokenstar." Oh, i don't know what to do today". Just then, a lamp fell out of the sky and out came .... Alladin! " no, aladin,you're not supposed to come out, Yogi Bear and Bubu should come out.", yelled Brokenstar. Just then, the bushes rattle and out came ....................................... a little farfetched and not my best work. it was pretty sloppy.  |
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 16, 2010 17:50:08 GMT -5
Little Ho jeep
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 17, 2010 15:05:04 GMT -5
Part 2
Brokenstar, star the tape", screamed Tigerstar. Brokenstar pressed the big red button and started rolling the film. About halfway in to scene, Tigerstar knocked down a big blue curtain. There he found Darkstripe using a typewriter and that's when Tigerstar got angry. " Brokenstar, you idiot, why's there a typewriter here? . " Nobody uses a Typewriter anymore, what is this?! 1987? " you realize most of the people here haven't even seen a typewriter before? " Tigerstar, we're on a budget", replied Brokenstar. " oh, so you went to an antique store........
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 17, 2010 15:05:23 GMT -5
star is supposed to be start
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 17, 2010 15:07:02 GMT -5
sorry, the time machine part comes later in the story, this is just were Tigerstar and Brokenstar(tail) start making a tv ad, about using Chloride toothpaste or something.
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 17, 2010 15:10:18 GMT -5
awesome!
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 17, 2010 18:53:21 GMT -5
PArt 3
TAKE 25
Ok,peeps, let's try this again!', screamed Tigerstar. Brokenstar started over again. " So, 4 out of 5 evil cats like me recommend Colgate toothepaste because it is good for your teeth", started Tigerstar. Then suddenly, a rabbit darted in front of them. Brokenstar was so hungry that he ran after the rabbit knocking down the camera. " Brokenstar, you retard, get back here. That camera costs like.....
3 hours later...
Tigerstar was still sitting in his chair doing the math, even though there was a huge price tag that said $ 248.57.
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:03:26 GMT -5
Nice!
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:03:45 GMT -5
Just, make it longer. Like mine.
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:04:30 GMT -5
You should't make the stories so far apart, between comments like Little Ho jeep.
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:04:56 GMT -5
What the heck is little ho jeep anyway?
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:05:39 GMT -5
Did little bo peep get sick and tired of her retarded sheep and decided to drive a jeep?
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:06:02 GMT -5
I would like little bo chevy-volt!
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:06:27 GMT -5
My dad is working on the chevy volt!  |
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 17, 2010 20:06:49 GMT -5
In Hamtramck/Highland Park(MI)
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