Moonflight
Warrior
If at first you don't succeed...so much for Skydiving
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Post by Moonflight on Apr 21, 2010 16:48:31 GMT -5
I think that if Ravenpaw stayed in Thunderclan with, say, Willowpelt as his mentor, he'd probably wouldn't be as timid. He'd drive out Brokenstar with Graypaw and Firepaw and would have a warrior name like Ravenflight or Ravenclaw, for you hp fans out there. He'd be shocked about Silverstream and furious at Tigerclaw. He'd mourn Whitestorm's death and would journey with the Clans to the Lake. I know this isn't much of a FanFic but wouldn't yall agree?
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Post by Sunnyfrost on Apr 21, 2010 19:49:24 GMT -5
yeah, i would agree. only he would probably be senior warrior by not, if not elder.
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Moonflight
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Post by Moonflight on Apr 21, 2010 20:36:14 GMT -5
Yeah I know. I hope Graystripe and Sandstorm don't retire soon.
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Pawkit
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Post by Pawkit on Apr 22, 2010 8:37:22 GMT -5
Graystripe and Sandstorm? RETIRE? No. They still have so many more kits to raise, as some are 'traitors' and one is disabled.
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Post by Sunnyfrost on Jun 12, 2010 17:40:11 GMT -5
yes, retire. They are the oldest warriors in the Clan, and Dustpelt and Sandstorm are a close second. I think Firestar is also losing confidence in himself, because in Dark River, he says something like "I'm sick of helping the other Clans out, and then finding that we have made them angry." Something like that. Also, we haven't seen him do a hunting patrol recently, have we? It makes sence that he would retire soon.
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Post by Hawkstar on Oct 31, 2010 7:11:00 GMT -5
Firestar is gonna DIE soon! Thank God!
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Post by Brownfur on Nov 1, 2010 2:02:46 GMT -5
Who is God? I only know of StarClan.
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 2, 2010 7:12:04 GMT -5
Atheist!
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Post by Sunnyfrost on Nov 2, 2010 15:16:24 GMT -5
rude much?
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Post by Brownfur on Nov 2, 2010 15:31:04 GMT -5
Well, actually, Cloudtail and Mothwing are athiests. I'm christian, because I believe in StarClan and they don't.
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Post by Brownfur on Nov 2, 2010 16:06:06 GMT -5
yes, retire. They are the oldest warriors in the Clan, and Dustpelt and Sandstorm are a close second. I think Firestar is also losing confidence in himself, because in Dark River, he says something like "I'm sick of helping the other Clans out, and then finding that we have made them angry." Something like that. Also, we haven't seen him do a hunting patrol recently, have we? It makes sence that he would retire soon. Dustpelt and Sandstorm are the oldest cats in the Clan, unless you count Mousefur and Purdy. I think they mentioned in the books that Firestar felt bad for them because they were older than him, yet he was already a warrior.
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Post by spiderpool on Nov 2, 2010 19:04:40 GMT -5
Ravenpaw is about Graystripe's age and he is younger than Dustpelt and Sandstorm (who I believe become elders in Night Whispers or Sign of the Moon) so he couldn't be and elder. The perfect warriors names would be Ravenclaw or Ravenflight. As of now Ravenpaw/claw/flight would be dead, driven out, left, or a senior warrior. His mate would've been Mousefur, Hollypelt (if Hollykit had survived), Larchfoot (if Larchkit had survived), or Hazeltail and they would've had kits.
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 3, 2010 14:58:44 GMT -5
I highly doubt that he would have kits with those last 3 cats you mentioned because they were too young for him! I would go with Mousefur, though.
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Post by Brownfur on Nov 5, 2010 17:47:09 GMT -5
Mousefur is around Mistystar's age, and I'd say that Mistystar's too old for him. And, by looking through some of the books, I've discovered that the only way for Ravenpaw to have a mate would be hor him to have a forbidden relationship. Everyone else was either too old, too young, or already taken. I think that Ravenpaw would have been taken, along with Graystripe, and would've mated with a kittypet.
You guys have, like, no creativity. Names for Ravenpaw: Ravenwing, Ravenflight, Ravensong, Ravencry, Ravenwhisper, or Ravenfeather. Ravenclaw is copyright to J.K. Rowling, so Erin Hunter might not've been able to use it. And why would she take someone else's name, when there are so many better ones anyway?
By the way, Ravenpaw is Dustpelt's brother.
I'm going to just make things up as I write. So Ravencry would be the second oldest cat in the Clan, with a mate called Kiara. And he'd have around four kits: Shadowfall, Crowflight, Abysspelt and Blackfeather. Crowflight would be Blossomfall's mate, and Abysspelt would be Toadstep's mate. Shadowfall would be the future mentor of Cherrykit, and Blackfeather would be the future mentor of Molekit.
That's what I think.
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Post by Brownfur on Nov 5, 2010 18:35:57 GMT -5
I think that if Ravenpaw stayed in Thunderclan with, say, Willowpelt as his mentor, he'd probably wouldn't be as timid. He'd drive out Brokenstar with Graypaw and Firepaw and would have a warrior name like Ravenflight or Ravenclaw, for you hp fans out there. He'd be shocked about Silverstream and furious at Tigerclaw. He'd mourn Whitestorm's death and would journey with the Clans to the Lake. I know this isn't much of a FanFic but wouldn't yall agree? If TIgerclaw hadn't been his mentor, then Ravenpaw might not've been at the battle, therefore no one would've seen Redtail's death. So Tigerclaw would have lived to become Tigerstar.
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