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Post by tadiesthorn on Jul 21, 2010 11:55:19 GMT -5
PROLOUGE:
I layed in the hay, with one worry in my mind- my kits. They seemed so sad that they were back in the barn, instead of the ThunderClan secure camp that we had lived in for the past moons. My kits were named Berrykit, Mousekit, and Hazelkit. They weren't Clan kits anymore. They were kitty-pets. As I dozed off into a sleep, I heard two familiar voices enter the barn, and when I glazed down to the ground, I saw a dark tabby pelt, and a white tom. My heart began to race. It was Brambleclaw, and Cloudtail! They must of came back to get my kits. Cloudtail... I heard voices muttering down below. "Yes, we wanted to make sure she and the kits were okay." Brambleclaw said. My kits squealed with delights, and as I leaped down and saw Cloudtail's trusting, blue gaze, my heart melted. As much as I wanted my gets to be safe in the barn, I saw how much they wanted to go- and I realized, that I wanted to go to. I may never be able to hunt, but I wanted to be with Cloudtail. He was the only tom I ever felt this way about- so strongly. I never had felt this way for Smoky. As we trekked back to ThunderClan territory, I hoped, that someday, maybe when Brightheart lived no longer, then mine and Cloudtail's tails will be twined, in happiness, forever. -
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Post by moonwhisker on Aug 25, 2010 13:14:44 GMT -5
poor brightheart! i like brightheart!
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Post by Sunnyfrost on Sept 6, 2010 13:26:13 GMT -5
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Post by Rainstar on Oct 24, 2010 16:57:34 GMT -5
i kinda like it
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Post by Hawkstar on Oct 25, 2010 14:13:11 GMT -5
As long as ugly Lostface dies, I'm okay with it.
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Post by Rainstar on Oct 25, 2010 16:05:16 GMT -5
yeah Lostface should have stayed Lostface
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