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Post by cherryleaf on Sept 24, 2010 7:16:01 GMT -5
Not just my first post here, but my first fan fic in a while, so please be nice!
My first love, my only love. I won't forget the way her eyes lit up every time she laughed. Such a pretty shade of green. She had a peculiar laugh, too, nothing I had heard before. And her dark ginger fur..Even as Rouges and loners, I had found myself drawn to her subtle beauty. Then Tigerstar made her a warrior...The name that still rings in my ears. Russetfur. We were in love from the moment we first glanced at each other, any cat with a brain could see that. For ages it was mutual, even after I became Blackstar, and named her my deputy. I remember how she had reacted. She had laughed, and said "Your not serious, Blackstar?" I remeber the delight in those green eyes as I told her I was. The same delight as when I asked her to be my mate, to which she said yes. She was old, but soon, she was bearing my kits.
It was to be her last battle before she entered the nursery...That battle over the land THEY gave us. And it was her last battle, though she never entered the nursery afterwards. I thought that clan followed the code. I thought the leader's grandson would be one to follow the code. But he broke the rule I hold most dear to me now..I know I will not find love again, and this was Starclan, telling us our love was wrong.
Russetfur, We will be together again one day, and Starclan themselves can try and stop us. And I might even see Ebonykit...That's what you wanted to name one of our kits...wasn't it?
I know, it's terrible xP
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Post by MoonleafSmileyFace on Oct 15, 2010 16:29:46 GMT -5
I love it
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Post by Sunnyfrost on Oct 23, 2010 8:09:12 GMT -5
its nice, although this couple will NEVER happen, its a great fanfic
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Post by Hawkstar on Oct 23, 2010 8:27:19 GMT -5
Nice Short Script!
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Post by Rainstar on Oct 29, 2010 18:07:22 GMT -5
cool
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 15, 2010 15:59:54 GMT -5
Ebonykit, though, really!
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 15, 2010 17:31:10 GMT -5
what about mackit, billykit, snookkit, frecklekit, and harveykit?
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 15, 2010 18:07:26 GMT -5
SNOOKTHORN!!
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 15, 2010 19:41:39 GMT -5
yeah
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Post by pteroisxremix on Nov 18, 2010 23:43:33 GMT -5
WOOT! XD
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 14:52:23 GMT -5
ok
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 19, 2010 16:42:54 GMT -5
Ok then, remix guy.
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 17:17:27 GMT -5
remix
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Post by Rainstar on Jan 13, 2011 16:15:27 GMT -5
Not to be off topic, but are any of you rich?
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Post by Hawkstar on Jan 17, 2011 7:44:06 GMT -5
Not gonna say it.
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