Post by Blizzardpelt on Nov 17, 2010 17:55:10 GMT -5
I'll try to make it longer this time, but no promises. 
When Blizzardpelt woke up the next morning, the sun was shining brightly into the Warriors' den. He saw Cloudtail with fresh-kill, and he figured he better go apologize about yesterday.
When Cloudtail saw him coming, he started inching away.
"Cloudtail?" Blizzardpelt asked.
Cloudtail dropped his fresh-kill. "What?" he asked.
"I just wanted to apologize about yesterday. I guess I was just nervous."
"It's fine. I guess I overreacted a little bit. It's not your fault. I mean, every cat gets nervous every once in a while."
"I'm glad you understand."
"So, want to do some battle training?"
Blizzardpelt thought about it. "Sure!"
"Great! Let's go!"
They decided to train in the Warriors' den for a change.
"Alright. Let's fight!" Cloydtail yowled.
Blizzardpelt lunged at him, but Cloudtail dodged a split second before he hit him.
"You need to be faster!" Cloudtail growled. "Learn your enemy's weakness and use against him!"
Blizzardpelt studied Cloudtail, and didn't see a weakness.
"Think fast!" Cloudtail exclaimed and jumped at Blizzardpelt.
Blizzardpelt gasped and ducked, as Cloudtail soared over him.
"Nice!" Cloudtail complimented. "You've improved! Now, Brightheart - I mean Blizzardpelt - "
That was it! Cloudtail's weakness was Brightheart! If something happened to Brightheart, Cloudtail couldn't bear it!
"Oh, Cloudtail?" Blizzardpelt asked in a worried voice.
"What is it?" Cloudtail jerked his head up.
"I think Brightheart's in pain! You better go see!"
"Brightheart! No!"
Cloudtail ran to the mouth of the den and cried "BRIGHTHEART!"
Brightheart ran up to the mouth of the den. "What's wrong?" she asked.
"Blizzardpelt told me - oh StarClan."
He turned too late, as Blizzardpelt hit him full force his his head.
Cloudtail gasped as the wind rushed out of him, and fell to the ground.
"Cloudtail!" Blizzardpelt cried.
"That classic...trick..." Cloudtail gasped for air.
"No! Jayfeather! Anybody! What have I done? What classic trick?" Blizzardpelt yowled.
"The play..." but Cloudtail's head fell down and his eyes closed.
"CLOUDTAIL! NO!" Blizzardpelt cried.
"Dead!" Cloudtail cried and leapt at Blizzardpelt.
Blizzardpelt was caught by surprise and was knocked over.
At first Blizzardpelt tensed. Then he started laughing hysterically.
"I got you!" Cloudtail laughed.
"You did!"
Cloudtail sighed. "Come on. Let's go get some fresh-kill. Then we can do some more training."
TO BE CONTINUED...
When Blizzardpelt woke up the next morning, the sun was shining brightly into the Warriors' den. He saw Cloudtail with fresh-kill, and he figured he better go apologize about yesterday.
When Cloudtail saw him coming, he started inching away.
"Cloudtail?" Blizzardpelt asked.
Cloudtail dropped his fresh-kill. "What?" he asked.
"I just wanted to apologize about yesterday. I guess I was just nervous."
"It's fine. I guess I overreacted a little bit. It's not your fault. I mean, every cat gets nervous every once in a while."
"I'm glad you understand."
"So, want to do some battle training?"
Blizzardpelt thought about it. "Sure!"
"Great! Let's go!"
They decided to train in the Warriors' den for a change.
"Alright. Let's fight!" Cloydtail yowled.
Blizzardpelt lunged at him, but Cloudtail dodged a split second before he hit him.
"You need to be faster!" Cloudtail growled. "Learn your enemy's weakness and use against him!"
Blizzardpelt studied Cloudtail, and didn't see a weakness.
"Think fast!" Cloudtail exclaimed and jumped at Blizzardpelt.
Blizzardpelt gasped and ducked, as Cloudtail soared over him.
"Nice!" Cloudtail complimented. "You've improved! Now, Brightheart - I mean Blizzardpelt - "
That was it! Cloudtail's weakness was Brightheart! If something happened to Brightheart, Cloudtail couldn't bear it!
"Oh, Cloudtail?" Blizzardpelt asked in a worried voice.
"What is it?" Cloudtail jerked his head up.
"I think Brightheart's in pain! You better go see!"
"Brightheart! No!"
Cloudtail ran to the mouth of the den and cried "BRIGHTHEART!"
Brightheart ran up to the mouth of the den. "What's wrong?" she asked.
"Blizzardpelt told me - oh StarClan."
He turned too late, as Blizzardpelt hit him full force his his head.
Cloudtail gasped as the wind rushed out of him, and fell to the ground.
"Cloudtail!" Blizzardpelt cried.
"That classic...trick..." Cloudtail gasped for air.
"No! Jayfeather! Anybody! What have I done? What classic trick?" Blizzardpelt yowled.
"The play..." but Cloudtail's head fell down and his eyes closed.
"CLOUDTAIL! NO!" Blizzardpelt cried.
"Dead!" Cloudtail cried and leapt at Blizzardpelt.
Blizzardpelt was caught by surprise and was knocked over.
At first Blizzardpelt tensed. Then he started laughing hysterically.
"I got you!" Cloudtail laughed.
"You did!"
Cloudtail sighed. "Come on. Let's go get some fresh-kill. Then we can do some more training."
TO BE CONTINUED...
