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Post by Rainstar on Nov 18, 2010 16:38:37 GMT -5
Part 2 Tiger's POV Sorry, that first part was a little messed up. Anyways, if you can read, you would notice that this fanfic is called Tigerstar's Time Machine, not Brokentail's, but Tigerstar's. Anyways, while i was figuring out the price of the camera, Brokentail was having a little adventure of his own. Brokenstar looked through the trashcans that loomed above his head, he was in the twolegplace in case you didn't know. Broken's POV I squuezed myself between the cans and was free. I looked at the scene. It was nothing like i had ever imagined. There was a sign that said " Crack is Whack!, so if you Lack, don't get some Crack". I didn't like what they promoted here. Then, i heard some kids yelling "Gay is not the Way"! I didn't understand that because my fATHER always told me that Gay WAS the way, and said that that if i didn't follow the Gay code,cause the Warrior Code got repalcaed, that bad things would happen to me. I walked along and found a huge building above me that said Nerds SCience, Mueseum. "open to only the finest nerds". I thought i was a nerd, cause i was pretty dumb. I looked inside and my whole brain, which wasn't very bid turned up side UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 18, 2010 16:39:41 GMT -5
Spelling mistakes: bid is big and Brokenstar is stupid
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 15:14:35 GMT -5
Part 2 continued............
Brokenstar walked into the big building, when suddenly he saw a Twoleg named Johnny running through the mueseum with another Twoleg chasing after him. "Johnny, i'm serious, how do you spell you're name!?", screeched the other one. " Jon - ee", replied the boy. " He's right", thought Brokenstar. " No, no, Johnny get down from there. Brokenstar looked up. Jonee was sitting on top of a huge cat eating dead thing. " You can't make me, you freako lady, caUSE nAKED mAN can go where no human has gone before. Johnny takes off his pants and evrybody, even Brokenstar gasps. " See, what i mean, freako lady? Wait, look at me!!!!!!!!!!!!", said Johnny. " No, i' m forbidden to look at the spot where the yucky things come out", yelled the lady. then Johnny started to dance. " You wish you were straight like ME!!!", sang Johnny. "JOHNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!", yelled the lady. Brokenstar liked what they promoted here, but he had a job to do.........
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 15:15:35 GMT -5
sorry, becuase this part 2 was in first person and this one is in third person.
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 16:25:38 GMT -5
Shut up! THIS ISN'T Politikz, weirdo!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 16:26:23 GMT -5
SHut UP. I'm serious
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 19, 2010 16:30:06 GMT -5
Yes, because you're are retarded and since you swear in the story, i officially make you part of The Gang. There's no taking it bad. You will be a gaang member till the curse is lifted. Have fun eating a sandwich with mustard, ketchup, cheese and eggs.
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Post by Hawkstar on Nov 19, 2010 16:42:05 GMT -5
COPYRIGHT! You used stuff that we discussed TOGETHER in band class and a lot of it is fom my posts/experiences/and things that i have said to you! Jonny was my idea in the first place to describe how bad the band at our school is!
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Post by Rosestar on Nov 19, 2010 17:17:10 GMT -5
Band isn't that bad and should i mention how you said the students were stupid or should i leave that to you?
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